- I could not believe it. The picture in my mind that came back to haunt me was now in front of me. This was no joke. 'There it is...' Liam said, pointing at the haunted castle. Cornellia gave a gasp. Melissa just yawned. I was trembling with fear. At least this wasn't like the other day. It wasn't raining. Just yesterday, I had been here. Now, I was here again. The reason was simple. Melissa and Cornellia had overheard our conversation. Now they were let in on the secret. The moon was high in the sky, a light against the dark sky. I was gratefull for it. At least there was some light to follow. Melissa suddenly interrupted my thoughts, 'C'mon! Let's go in! It's boring waiting here!' Just just now, Melissa was trembling with fear when she listened to Liam's story. Now she was so brave and confident. I'd love to see her face when she meets the demon boy. Liam nodded once at Melissa. Together, they stormed up the porch and pushed open the doors of the castle. Me and Cornellia trailed behind. I was afraid and so was Cornellia. It was just as I had remembered from yesterday night. The floorboard was dusty and it creaked when the four of us walked on it. The moonlight made the castle scarier. The stained windows were exactly the same in the main hall. They were lined perfectly along the walls with pictures of bearded men. I tip-toed in the main hall. Everything was just as I had remembered. A few feet ahead of me, Liam and Melissa were walking forward in the long hall. Suddenly, a flash of light caught my attention. I squinted at the place where I'd seen. And I gasped. At the end of the long hall, there was a piano there. The piano chair was full. On it sat the demon boy. He was just as I had remembered. Or seen. His face was handsome, very angelic. He wasn't looking at anything and suddenly, he seemed to notice my gaze. He jerked his head toward me so suddenly, I got a fright. I froze for a fraction of a second. And then, he smiled at me, revealing a row of razor sharp teeth....
- by rainygoble |
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- | Submitted on 06/19/2009 |
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- Title: Stuck in a nightmare,Chapter 8
- Artist: rainygoble
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There it is..... Go on in!.... RUN FOR IT! ......*SCREAMS*
Jason Baker, Melissa Broadman, Cornellia Tisdal and Liam Connor are in a twist of a nightmare. They travel into the haunted house where they meet the DEMON BOY. Will they survive?
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No part of this may be reproduced or copyrighted in any form without written permission of the author himself. - Date: 06/19/2009
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Comments (3 Comments)
- Lord Rhythm - 08/11/2010
- you need to use comma's more. There needs to be different varieties of sentences or it becomes repetitive and boring.
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- lvhtjsnlwys101 - 06/22/2009
- this is really good. keep writing
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- Sonata of the Damned - 06/21/2009
- It's pretty good. Comment back: http://www.gaiaonline.com/arena/writing/fiction/vote/?entry_id=101465079
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