- Dleilah ran down the narrow ally runnign from the monster. She ran around winding conners afraid as hell. She was connered and had no where to hide. She scream for help but it sounded as if she was inside a box. She looked down as the monster came closer showing its teeth. "Mr. fluffy! She said petting it then it bite her and ran off. She layed down and died. The end.
- by Sweet-Tearful-Laughter |
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- | Submitted on 07/26/2009 |
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- Title: Delilahs run.
- Artist: Sweet-Tearful-Laughter
- Description: The girl had no where to run! Nowhere to hide what will she do. Yes I knwo this is dume as hell I can't sleep so I worte this lol.
- Date: 07/26/2009
- Tags: delilahs
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Comments (4 Comments)
- ElectraShocked - 08/04/2009
- oh...well it still could have been longer and more discriptive. Nice plot, but expand it a bit.
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- Sweet-Tearful-Laughter - 07/27/2009
- yeah I know lol like I said in the discription I was bored as hell so I wrote this.
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- taro_gogo_zu - 07/27/2009
- Hahahaha NICE ONE DUDE!!
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- Kauzo Kiriyama - 07/26/2009
- Creative but not very discreptive.
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