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I walked over to the pond i had grown to love so much in these past moths. i stared in its
unnatural dark blue face, and saw my reflection. i touched my crown of golden leaves that the
trees had given me, and it ignited with rainbow sparks. I had given up hope of ever seeing my
old family ever again. seeing another human was even hard to believe now...
"hello" said a voice from behind me. "hello tree number 5, how are you today?" i answered,
sitting up and scooting around in a circle to face the tree. But in front of my beloved tree was a
boy about my age, staring at me with a puzzled look on his face. He was holding Aleana. I
gasped and shot up, reaching for my loved cat. I scooped her out of his arms, stroking her.
"The trees tell me you've been here a long time, would you like to come back with me to our
town?" the boy asked, holding out his hand. I could tell he was staring at my crown. I took his
hand in mine. "of course i would" i answered.
the end for now
- by Annelise loves polka dots |
- Fiction
- | Submitted on 09/04/2009 |
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Comments (6 Comments)
- Annelise loves polka dots - 09/26/2009
- aww, thanks guys! this was a little rushed because i had to go to a movie with my friend right before it, thanks for commenting! smile
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- Vezild - 09/22/2009
- u shuld continue...its got potential!
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- Lady_Hawkmoon93 - 09/15/2009
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Your concept seems interesting, but the idea of a fantasy forest guardian referring to a tree as #5 seems a bit odd to me, but I may just be missing your concept...
I think that you mean "beloved" instead of "loved", but its a good start for a story. - Report As Spam
- Annelise loves polka dots - 09/11/2009
- if anyone likes it, please tell me and i will write more
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- Annelise loves polka dots - 09/10/2009
- ummm she is a protector of the forest. i will explain more later...
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- Amii-Amiri - 09/08/2009
- what is she?????
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