Sieya's Peace part.1

• Artist: Darling-Angeline
• Description: Well i thought up a new story of a young girl named Sieya, who always waanted peace.
• Date: 09/28/2009
• Tags: sieyas peace

The war was powerful and full of hate. In Japan Sieya could not bare it no longer. She and her brother Nyuua were saddly hiding form the British soldiers who were invading the country. Sieya was only 12 and Nyuua was 7.
"Sieya Im scared, I want nana!" cried Nyuua.
"Hush child, nana is hiding upstairs in the yard in his doghouse."whispered Sieya.
Blood was everywhere in the cherry blossom orchird in the forests. Britian was againts Japan because they refused to buy slaves. But nobody likes slavery in Britian, niether does Sieya........... continues in part.2

Comments

[CalvinRexx]

There really isn't much to comment or rate here. This barely makes any sense and it's nothing more than some dialogue and two paragraphs. You should have added more to it and tried to make it make a little more sense.

[Darling-Angeline]

please vote and rate.