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Mike woke up, and glanced at a clock. he got up and got dressed. while heading down the stairs he shouts "mom, im heading to max's, see yah in about........ 4 hours." he grabbed his skateboard and headed outside. when he got outside, he jumped on his skateboard and sped to max's house. wich was a few blocks over. when he got there, he heard max scream. Mike ran as fast as his feet could carry him, and as he got close enough too the house, he saw a man shoving max into a van. mike ran toward them but as he got closer, another man appeard and shot at mike.as soon as mike saw the gun he ducked for cover. then the men sped away. mike grabbed a hooked rope and his skateboard and attached the hook to the car and got on his skateboard. The men in the van laughed and said " that was one crazy kid." the other said" yah, i wonder....... what the hell?!?" the two glaced back to see mike riding on his skateboard holding the rope attached to the van.
the guy in the passenger seat pulled out a shot gun and yelled " hey boy!!! let go of the rope and well let u live, dont, and we shoot!" max made a muffled scream as she heard this. mike yelled " NO! youd have to shoot me 50 times before i give up!!!" the guy shot and mike used his board as a shield, and wich it worked. then mike pulled out a bbgun and shot the guy in the eye. then he used the bbgun to shoot the lock open in the back on the van. mike jumped in and helped max up. and then they both jumped out of the van. once they did that they started to run as fast as they could. then the van pulled up in front of them, both of the men looked very mad.
Mike ran at them and tackled the guy he shot in the eye. the other man tried to shoot mike but..... shot the one eyed guy in the groin instead. then mike wrestled the gun out of the pained man and shot him dead, then mike ran to help max. he got in front of max and started shooting the man. mike and the man were shooting constantly. mike shot the man in the arm, leg, and close to the ribs. then after that last shot the man took the last of his life and shot mike rite in the heart. mike, acting not a minute late cause as mike fell to the floor, shot the man in the head. as mike was dying he said to max " heh..........i guess my heart bled for u as i die..............." as tears built in max's eyes, they kissed. and mike then breathed and died....
- Title: The boy who died saving his gf
- Artist: Zack4568
- Description: a story i wrote about a boy who loves a girl so much, that when shes kiddnapped, he wont sleep till shes safly in his arms...... then protecting her, he dies.......
- Date: 12/24/2009
- Tags: died saving
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Comments (4 Comments)
- Holy Rosanna - 07/01/2012
- That was good, i would change the name to like Saving Max or something like that because, the title said what happen in the ending. So i knew Mike was going to die.
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- Najiika Haru - 01/01/2010
- aww. Thats really good! Yet sad. Great Job!!!
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- PacmanBakaWakka - 12/28/2009
- bittersweet...
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- cookiemnster12345 - 12/24/2009
- wow sad but really cute =D
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