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Btw this is #4.Clickity here to start at the beginning
I ran home as quick as I could. I didn't bother thinking of what I would see. I didn't care. I just wanted to get home and get it over with. I was running fairly fast. I used to play american football as a wide reciever. After a few minutes I made it to my gate. The house looked empty from the outside. I walked up my pathway and all of a sudden some girl jumped out of the bushes and tackles me. I tried to keep my conciousness alive, so I could see who the girl was.
"Comon' Ray! Get up you big sissy," says the girl. I recognized the voice. "Mara?"
"In the flesh. Now hurry up lets get inside."
"Why are you here?"
"I came here to grab a couple snacks. It was easy jumping passed the gate, but I couldn't pick the lock on your door. You got one of those new techy doorknobs didn't you?"
"It's made of wood."
"Whatever. Just hurry up and open the door."
"You're the one. . . that sent me that text messege."
"Yeah, how else was I suppose to get you to cut school?"
"You know you're sick."
"Yeah, I know. Can we just hurry and go in, my lips are chapping out here."
"Fine."
- Title: Boot boot booted (4)
- Artist: Rayzap
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Description:
This is part of a full length story(that I've written in a regular 70 page notebook). It's about a teenager named Ray who is the generic "Chosen One" character.
My english teacher gave me a B- on this so enjoy - Date: 06/26/2010
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