- “Hey I’m right here why can’t you see me!!” I asked my mom, while she was crying, but she didn’t even acknowledge me, am I dead? That’s it! Here’s what happened. It was a cloudy night but you could still see the full moon through the pouring rain. My friends and I were standing in front of a 5th Ave. jewelry shop and I saw something moving in there I told Casey and being twins she told Lucynda and it spread from her to Max then we all stared into the store. We saw two statuesque figures who appeared to be ladies. They paused and stared straight at us and we all froze everyone but I sprinted out of there but I couldn’t move I was so scared I was shaking. They limped up to the window they were beautiful except for their nails and half bald head. They were staring at me now eyes to eyes. The wind whispered in my ears and it seemed as if it kept saying run, run, I should’ve listened. They reached through the window and almost grabbed me but I got control of myself and sprinted the way my friends went and I found them. “That was mad scary!!” Max said “I still got the chills.” Then at the same time Casey and Lucynda said “What happened to you? Are you okay?” “I froze and they limped up to the window and stared into my eyes. I was so scared they liked hypnotized me and almost grabbed me THROUGH THE WINDOW! I was so scared! Their faces were so vague but I could see some of them.” Finally we went home and called each other on three-way. I said “That was scary maybe we should get a detective?” Casey being a straight A smarty pants she corrected me and said “sleuth would be the correct term” “Your such a smarty-pants CC stop correcting people!” Then they went off in quarrel over the phone, so we hung up and called eachother, Max and I, we figured we should get a P.I. so I got a phonebook and found a number. I called the number, she said her name was Rabecca Crownburg and she would come visit tomorrow and we would talk. The next day I kept feeling pokes and pains everywhere, while we gathered with the detective. We told her the story and she said “a special piece of jewlery was stolen and it was said to have special powers but nobody believes that.” I decribed their faces through the foggy glass, pale white skin, both had long black hair, long fingernails, and they had mismatch eyes one of them had purple and blue the other had green and gray their eyes were so hypnotizing . I was petrified ,I got chills remembering that moment. Rabecca said that she would come back tomorrow with names. The next day I still had those pains and everyone else looked like they felt them too Rabecca asked if we were ok we said fine but we weren’t so she said “well ok so I got names the Vanhuesen sisters Agitha and Alice they are said to be witches they are crazy and only come out at night but they are extremely mysterious so be careful.” Then there was an aukward silence and she left. That night I fell asleep and had the craziest dream those witches were taking me to their shak in the forest and tied me up with everyone else. I woke to screams seeing that it was no dream and screamed along with every one. We heard two blood curdling cackles “Ehhehehehe” We were so frightened our hearts leaped up into our throats and Max was acctually crying you literally saw puddles on the ground. We were petrified I forze again while the girls tried to get out of their chairs and Max cried. We probably figured Rabecca would find us but we were still scared, across the room we saw two broomsticks, 4 dolls that look just like us and like a billion lit candles around us. The two ladies waited til nightfall and strapped us to the broomsticks 2 each and they flew off with us, finally we landed at an abandoned church “stop struggling we have your dolls tied also so you can’t move no matter how much you struggle,” I felt my phone vibrate in my boot and saw they were in the other room so I answered it carefully it was Rabecca “Where are you?” She asked. “Call everyone we’re in an abandoned church some where please HELP! Max is acctually crying in public we are all scared! Come NOW!!!” but I saw them coming so I quickly whispered “track this phone call” then I hung up and hid it in my foot again. They came and grabbed me wait ME?! Why me ?!Oh No this is bad they’re putting me in the middle of a star I was scared I was scared I didn’t know what to do so I tried to move but couldn’t. I was practically dead. They put a shattered jewel around me……… it was the one they stole! They took out a list and they checked off everything including child’s blood then I fainted that’s all I remember, then nobody with could hear or see me now I’m sitting here with my mom crying at my funeral along with Casey Lucynda and Max that’s when I figured I was dead I just don’t know how I died all I know is theyu found the shattered jewel our voodoo dolls and the list they found the Vanhusen sisters and they disappeared never to be seen again. Well I told you my story, but watch out now that you know this they are after you, goodbye.
- by puppiesrluved13 |
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- | Submitted on 11/19/2010 |
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- Title: The Magic Murderers
- Artist: puppiesrluved13
- Description: this is about a person telling a story about how they died and it involves magic if you like that kind of stuff this is a good story for you.but it was for school so it's not my best work.
- Date: 11/19/2010
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