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There Was A Boy....That Had A Deadly Power....He Could Destroy The World.....His Name Was Darkia...This Is In His Memories.......
Darkia Ran Through A Dark Forest And Tripped Over A Log!?!?!
He Then Saw....A Dark Mage?
He Then Only Saw Black......And....He Woke Up Standing Over A Pit Of Fire...
Darkia Looked Behind Him...And Saw....THE DEVIL!!!!!!
He Then Suddenly Pulled Out A Sword And Attacked The Devil...And Threw Him Into The Pit Of Fire! And That Was When....It Started......The Day...(Might Be Continued)
- by Thanaturge |
- Fiction
- | Submitted on 01/17/2011 |
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Comments (1 Comments)
- TheGreatNoOne - 01/22/2011
- er... good. But needs more detail. And, I'll be honest, this is really nothing special. Sorry, but as a fellow writer I know when a story needs more of a base to it.
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