Party

• Artist: mmegannn
• Description: I play as daisy in a story.
• Date: 07/03/2011
• Tags: party

"I told you no one was gonna come." I said to my best friend peach.We were going to have a party but, a storm broke out. Then she asked "So?" as she got into her night gown. " I'm just saying that you shouldn't of dress up and put a bunch of make up on and, hoping bowser was gonna come." "Shhhhhh."she said "Mario is across the hall." "Sorry."

Comments

[CrystalizedSweets]

hmm a mario theme one.... if there was more you would have gotten a 5/5 but it's too short so 4/5

[mmegannn]

I know im kinda not good at spelling

[Wind-Blown Dandilion]

... quite a few grammatical errors...