A Desolated Power

• Artist: Xx_Cupcakelovergonebad_xX
• Description: An excerpt from a book I'm writing.
• Date: 03/01/2014
• Tags: desolated power

Havoc reaping the land... The place I once called home was gone. Some say your fate is enevitable, you can't simply walk away from it. Some say God chooses your destiny and you must follow it. But in this place: God had abandoned the land before him. And Fate? Well I just had to say no to that.

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[Xx_Cupcakelovergonebad_xX]

Thank you /, It's still in the working so I'm glad you caught that for me!

[synchodai]

"Some say your fate is enevitable, you can't simply walk away from it."

You have a run-on, but apart from that, this is a sound excerpt.