LIVE OR LOOSE

• Artist: xxx mz smexii xxx
• Description: its about a 18 year old girl having sex wit people to get money
  but on night she messed with the wrong people she has to leave her home with her family
  
  if you want to hear more read my story
• Date: 01/05/2009
• Tags: live loose

? i never thought a about dying till this day is it worth loosing the one i love?
my name is Emily Jones i i live in cali and im 18 i still live with my parents. and the onley one whos keeping from killing my self is Erick he go,s to my school i still never told him how i strip for a living but each day i surfer for it . today was the worse i found out i was pregnet from some gang member at the bar!! i was leting him do everything to me and i couldent stop him.
well i looked him up his name is John miller i was so worred when i arrived at his apartment when i knocked on his door he came out he said 'guys look who came back for more' i was about to beat his a** when he said that intell i saw the gun in hes pocket. so i just said angrely im pregnet cause of you.well look whos fault it is i wasent the stripper in there he said.
i looked at him with desive in my eyes asking my self is he righ

Comments

[XxSexii CoOkehzzxX]

why you copieng the first line of twilight ??

[Klaora]

I think I died a little on the inside.
Make that a lot. x.x
First, this is not the fiction section.
Secondly, PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE fix spelling, grammar, punctuation, capitalization, and your paragraphs. And, no offense, please don't write anything else until you do!
Also, try writing about what you know or if you can truly imagine yourself in that situation.

[CRM96]

the first line, you copied off of twilight : ( It was a good lesson i guess but try not to use so much slang.