Please, Don't

• Artist: Immortal Cynicism
• Description: Awsome... This is my second poem. I started it after I finished homework in a class... lol. My dad doesn't do this, and I love him to pieces, so don't freak after reading. It isn't real. But I know people out there where this is reality. And I'm sorry for you guys but, remember, we still care.
• Date: 11/03/2008
• Tags: please dont goldenstate

Closed my eyes,
Didn't breath,
Oh god please,
Don't find me.

I hid myself well,
Concealed from you,
Now you can't find me,
There's NOTHING you can do.

You no longer can hit me,
Kick at me, scream,
Daddy stop with the drinking,
You know what I mean.

Mommy left us,
You see what you've done?
You threatened her harshly,
And now she's gone, gone, gone.

I miss her a lot,
I cry every night,
But you don't care, daddy,
All you do is fight.

You broke my arm yesterday,
You snapped my heart too,
I loved you so much,
Now I'm scared through and through.

I hear your footsteps coming,
You're finally in this room,
I squeezed my eyes shut,
Awaiting the doom.

You shout my name loudly,
Kick a few walls,
Come near my spot,
Making my skin crawl.

So I... closed my eyes,
I didn't breath,
Hoping, daddy, please,
Don't ever find me.

Comments

[Zavara]

The first poem I've come across that's decent! It's very good. So many people will be able to relate to this and even if they can't, this can help them understand, especially with the use of different colours to emphasize certain words. 5*

[Immortal Cynicism]

Thanks guys for the comments. I never thought this was going to go any where. And please, I'm not an emo.

[SolsticeXII]

ah this poem is so sad, mostly vuz this really can happen. This sorta stuff always makes me sad.... great poem its very nice

[Luna hanna]

thnx for the thought... I really like this poem 5 stars,
it is painful to see your love ones hurt themselves...n u!

[Last Shine]

This almost made me cry because it is so close to some peoples reality. It is very good though.

[controller_of_the_dark]

emo!!!!!

[P a n c a k l e s]

Oooooh it's so good.
And sad.
D:
But I still like.