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She is a porcelain doll,
Shattering to pieces
With every uttered syllable,
her faith in love decreases
With every single word
that tears another seam
in the stitches holding her together,
And tethering her dream
Of kisses, hugs, and warmth;
"One plus one" is through
With one tiny, simple sentence
That splits her heart in two.
And this little girl left broken
Is cold, harsh proof some words
are better left unspoken.
- by Julia Dream |
- Poetry And Lyrics
- | Submitted on 10/29/2008 |
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- Title: I have no interest in you.
- Artist: Julia Dream
- Description: Words can be cruel.
- Date: 10/29/2008
- Tags: have interest
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Comments (7 Comments)
- conceptually_concrete - 12/11/2008
- The use of irony is certainly appropriate here. Well done.
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- x-X-White-Snowfall-X-x - 12/09/2008
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I love it. It's Different, with feeling, and redaction.
5/5 :3 - Report As Spam
- xi will always love youx - 12/09/2008
- Wow. That...was....wow.
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- NanaiJune - 12/09/2008
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i swear ur like my gaian idol
this was truley wonderful and had so much feeling
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- xXCuddlie_Yet_ViciousXx - 12/09/2008
- wow. it portrays so much emotion! i LOVE it smile
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- Xx_Toxiic_xX - 12/09/2008
- It's so awesome. I absolutely adore it. 5/5 completely!
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- Tagga - 12/09/2008
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Beautiful. 5/5. You should make a song out of it.
Look for mine, Zombie Sunset. - Report As Spam