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I am alone in this crowd.
All to myself, abandoned at heart.
Make all the world silent! It tears me apart!
Can my life get any lower, this is what my mind thinks.
On my own, the only light of hope blinks.
Like mercury in a thermometer, all of my life sinks.
Down and alone, my life has no links.
Abandoned again, to ponder my lack of a heart.
Nobody listens, they pass on, not even giving me a fresh start.
Down on the ground I kneel, broken apart.
Accused of wrong, and rightfully so.
Lonely, in pain, my own injuries I sew.
Off to make a friend, though I already know.
No energy to run, but everywhere to go.
Every day passes, as my heart continues to sink low.
...but nobody notices....
... life goes on.
- by 290DarkStars |
- Poetry And Lyrics
- | Submitted on 04/01/2009 |
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- Title: Thermometer of My Heart
- Artist: 290DarkStars
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Description:
Find the hidden message,
and if you are brave enough to read it.
MYGOSH PEOPLE COMMENT! - Date: 04/01/2009
- Tags: thermometer heart
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Comments (4 Comments)
- hatman69 - 04/08/2009
- oh my gosh. I am sorry. i get it.
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- Nostraamus - 04/07/2009
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I feel your pain
I am the same...
But I just want to disappear
To have no one know I was ever there
Noticed but not truly noticed
Cause they don't care
(sorry I got in the mood XD)
but yeah amazing poem ^^ - Report As Spam
- Hot pink Killer07 - 04/01/2009
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?ummm is the message of you standing on your own?like if you are repeatedly not noticed?
check out my poem search my name at the top smile - Report As Spam
- Daddy Got This Account - 04/01/2009
- i got the hidden message it says "i am cold and alone" nice jod on the poem. i liked it. 5/5
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