MY LUV 4 U.......... NOT!!

• Artist: redrosefire44
• Description: THIS IS SORTA LIKE A ROMANCE POEM BUT I ADDED TWISTS 2 IT 2 MAKE IT SEEM INTERESTING INSTEAD OF JUST SOME LAME OLD BORING LUV POEM
• Date: 11/09/2008
• Tags: love funny comedy rose poems

ROSES ARE RED, VIOLETS ARE BLUE,
SUGAR IS SWEET AND SO ARE YOU,
BUT THE ROSES ARE WILTING, THE VIOLETS ARE DEAD,
THE SUGAR BOWL'S EMPTY AND SO'S YOUR HEAD.

KIND, INTELLIGENT, AND HOT,
THIS DESCRIBES EVERYTHIN YOU ARE NOT.

OF LOVING BEAUTY YOU FLOAT WITH GRACE,
IF ONLY YOU COULD HIDE YOUR FACE.

I WANA FEEL YOUR SWEET EMBRACE,
BUT DONT TAKE THAT PAPER BAD OFF YOUR FACE.

I LOVE YOUR FACE, YOUR SMILE, YOUR EYES,
DAMN IM GOOD AT TELLING LIES! XD

I SEE YOUR FACE WHEN IM DREAMING,
AND THATS WHY I ALWAYS WAKE UP SCREAMING.

MY LOVE YOU TAKE MY BREATH AWAY,
WHAT HAVE YOU STEPPED INTO TO SMELL THIS WAY?

MY FEELINGS FOR YOU NO WORDS CAN TELL
EXCEPT FOR THE WORDS "GO 2 HELL"

DONT MESS WITH MY LIFE, IT'LL BE A CRIME
IF YOU DON'T LISTEN, WELL......YOU'LL JUST DIE.

Comments

[Epic Bubblez]

i pretty much luv the whole thing and it on my profile XDD

[Lady Icee]

that was funny

[xx_batty 4 you_xx]

wow..that is awesome..im glad you added twists to it

[Deflorescere]

"my feelings for you no words can tell....except for the words go 2 hell" lmao genius!
Love the "i love your face, your smile, your eyes...damn i'm good at telling lies!"
^Best line ever. As for the mean one down there, poetry IS art. But who says this isn't art? xD

[ymPsiegetanK]

reallly funny 5/5 but make sure you check spelling razz

[blackout023]

lol dont listen to the hypacrit thats criticizing u lol shes just mad cause she didn't make it XP

[Epic Bubblez]

HAHAHAHAA LOLZ ROLF LMAO OMG THATS SO FUNNY OMG OMG OMG HOW COULD U THINK OF A FUNNY THING LIKE THAT HAHAHAHAHAAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAA