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You are my star by the pond,
On a dark,dry,day.
You are my last little happyness,
When all have blown away.
You are my moon under a dark sky,
When the stars lie in wake.
To tell all of this to you,
Is too much or me to take.
- by Dragon_lover_67. |
- Poetry And Lyrics
- | Submitted on 07/15/2008 |
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- Title: All these things
- Artist: Dragon_lover_67.
- Description: This is about the only poem I really have ever done and it means everything to me.This person is my world and they have no idea...
- Date: 07/15/2008
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Comments (4 Comments)
- iFagatron - 11/08/2009
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Good considering it's one of your only. =] Slight typo on the last line though. D: 4/5
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- korirty67 - 04/30/2009
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cool
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- ninja-kyoko-chan - 07/17/2008
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mmm...put it this way
it'd be the only flower that everyone else wants
i hope that isn't stupid...XD - Report As Spam
- xxblah_girlxx - 07/16/2008
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Very nice I like it. Only thing - "When all have blown away" - the word have annoys me - has? hath? all else has? Yeah that's it. Nice style - metaphors.
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