meh soul

• Artist: Death_in_flamesX_X
• Description: A peace of poetry i wrote when i was bored tell me if its good or if it straight up sucks
• Date: 07/15/2008
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My soul is like an empty can
one that i cannot stand
for this i feel as if i am banded
banded from whats inside
i knew she had something to hide
but now i realize that i would have rather died
i know people would have cried
when the time is right
i will be out of sight
out of reach
and out of help
u don't want to feel what i've felt
or what i've delt
u would feel as if u were about to melt
no one to trust
about to bust
and to die i must.

Comments

[Toastbusters]

A dog and a frog both rode a hog,
into town, they wore a crown, and made a frown.
Town was gone, they sang a song, then they yawned.

Actually these are really fun to write!
Oh, but your poem is terrible.

[vampires_rock2]

thats really good

[darkstar32390]

Its alright I guess. The rhymes are elementary. Theyre kinda like, for example...
I had a cat
His name was Matt
and he was fat.
A bit bland. Sorry.