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She is my world
She means everything to me.
She'll be an independent and strong woman...
thats what she'll be.
So cheerful and witty...
even through her ups and downs.
Picking me up and giving me strength
And wipes away my tears.
... heart
- by messy midori |
- Poetry And Lyrics
- | Submitted on 07/17/2008 |
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- Title: Samantha
- Artist: messy midori
- Description: This is a poem about me that my mom wrote.
- Date: 07/17/2008
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Comments (3 Comments)
- 290DarkStars - 03/31/2009
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awsome! It has great rythem and visualasation!(<= say that 5 times fast) but...errr.... rythem and the point are the two key parts to a poem, THEN comes rhyming and stanzas! Idk how you descoverd me on Gaia and became a fan of mine, but i am happy that I descoverd you, and I am happy to have you as a fan. mrgreen
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- linkinpark865 - 02/08/2009
- i like it 9/10
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- k-ro iero - 01/04/2009
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hii
thank u so much for the comment ^-^
that its a great poem smile - Report As Spam
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