birth of a devil

• Artist: xwolfz
• Description: a symbolic metaphor using a devil as a comparison,
  there is a devil within each of us ...
  it may be small part ...
  or a great proportion ...
  the devil within us is ...
  the wickedness inside our heart ,
  the impurities of our soul,
  the dark emotions we suppressed,
  and our weakness that we have not yet to admit ...
  
  at any point of our lives this devil maybe break us from reality,
  and we submit into eternal darkness ...
  
  
  - also located in my dA account as musicwolfz
  
• Date: 07/17/2008
• Tags: devil birthofadevil reality

bitterness builds within me.
and it begins to eat my soul
silently, evil slips into my mind
emotions runs wild, and free
rage, anger and vengeance surfaces
the pure soul instantly tenses and blackens
my conscience drifts away ...

a beast,
no monster,
no even worse ...
a devil is born.

it takes over my body, mind, and soul
bringing disaster to my life
memories, freewill, and happiness disintegrates
with no will to fight back ...
i fall into a deep slumber,
isolated from reality ...
losing myself ...

in pure darkness ...

lonely and disgusted.

Comments

[trueprfashn]

wow 0.o pretty cool

[Xx-Mystra-xX]

BrAvO!!!!!
really loved it
interesting and beautiful
really powerful
i enjoyed reading this and would like
to read more
really great job describing and comparing worlds
..
i also myself write dark poetry...
if interested u should read some
...

[iRetardedGenius]

That is awesome!! I hope youi make more later!! Tell me if you do!! ^___^ 5/5

[fizznomore]

Or is it a metaphorical symbol? O.O

[sleepy sylphy]

wow, this is pretty good! I especially like the last part 3nodding

[messy midori]

I reallylike it. It shows what really happens!

[Sir Fluff-n-Stuff]

Really good! You got talent! You good at laying out your emotion in this poem biggrin