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When i'm by myself
and close my eyes
i'm a twin
i am a dimple in a chin
i'm a room full of toys
i'm a squeaky noise
i'm a gospel song
i'm a gong
i'm a leaf turning red
i'm a whatever i want to be
and when i open my eyes
what i care to be is me
- by mamaafrica101 |
- Poetry And Lyrics
- | Submitted on 07/27/2008 |
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- Title: be myself
- Artist: mamaafrica101
- Description: just read it and tell me what you think of it.
- Date: 07/27/2008
- Tags: bemyself
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Comments (3 Comments)
- vv7722 - 07/22/2009
- I think you could do a better job on writing it, but the message is very powerful and touching. Thank you for sharing that.
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- Savior_ofunsafespirits - 01/31/2009
- The middle doesn't really match up in syllables, but the end is great!
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- One Dandy Fop - 07/27/2008
- watch the syllable counts, it feels like it could use some meter.
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