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forgotten:
the cool breeze passes through my hair,
the slience, is all i hear.
alone in this forgotten place,
no ones around no one to face.
abandon neglected, im all alone,
nothing to arm, to fight on my own.
i feel empty, like a bottomless pit,
giving me no hope, i feel sick.
my body is falling to thousands of pieces,
u being gone is tearing me into pieces.
i cry each night, because ur gone,
these feelings i have, it feels so wrong.
my body is left for the scavengers in the ground,
but my spirit is still stalking around.
walking alone on the empty streets,
i go out on a search to find the lost me.
- by Torao Tsuki |
- Poetry And Lyrics
- | Submitted on 09/07/2008 |
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- Title: forgotten
- Artist: Torao Tsuki
- Description: hehe i was bored
- Date: 09/07/2008
- Tags: forgotten forsaken place
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Comments (7 Comments)
- Luna_luna8 - 07/02/2009
- PEOPLE READ THIS POEM! ^_^
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- Torao Tsuki - 11/29/2008
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sweet!
thanks! glad you u guys all like it! - Report As Spam
- vegeta238 - 11/29/2008
- awesome dude you r very talented sierously
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- ii Flavorfull_Condomz ii - 11/29/2008
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WOW U HAVE TALENT
IVE NEVER HEARD ANYTHING LIKE IT
IT TOUGHES ME
THIS ROXS
HOPE U NEVER GIVE THIS
LOVED IT
I GIVE IT A
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- Torao Tsuki - 11/28/2008
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thank you!
glad you think so! - Report As Spam
- Rook219 - 11/28/2008
- very nice.
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- -Dark-Light_Memmories- - 11/28/2008
- i liked it, you have real talent. hope to see some more of your work. ^.^
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