In You

• Artist: Cezille07
• Description: Finding love in someone else who doesn't love you back...how does that hurt?
• Date: 10/18/2008
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I said goodnight and closed my eyes
I bid my friends farewell
And soon enough I’ll fall asleep
To find my world of dreams

But to my astonishment
I found myself right here
Standing right in front of you
Conversing with your peers

I felt at home in your presence
And soon we were close friends
This felt so good, I felt so free
I wished this wouldn’t end

Tell me now that I’m not dreaming
I don’t want to leave you here
Stay in my corner, be content
With watching you while I’m in tears

Comments

[Lotus136]

I love it!great job!

[atsyrk]

ok this rocked, its me all over. i no how u feel. 5/5
care to read mine?

[Teayo]

that was simply beautiful 5/5

[ahouseofwolves]

I've been through that a million times... and one day I found him. This poem almost made me cry - a definite winner. Six out of five!

[Hidden Shadow Love]

That was beautiful I think. I understand what it's like to love someone who doesn't return the feelings. I give it 4 stars!