Closed

• Artist: GoldenMoth
• Description: Just something I came up with, although this never happened to me, I think it will help someone that has had this happen to them. :)
• Date: 10/19/2008
• Tags: breakup lettinggo andclosedin

I feel closed up like in a small space
Just about every time I see your face.

You hurt me once but not again
I feel like running from a once loved friend.

You said goodbye and never returned
people talk about how I got burned

I trusted you and you let me down
I have no other option but to frown

I can't walk and neither run or hide
Every time I try, I get a pain inside

I don't like to be caged, in a small space or box
I have found the key and opened all the locks

What you did was such a crime
I will say goodbye this time.

Comments

[s h a d o w _ l o v e s]

beautiful.

[I Is BHiNd YoU]

REALLY GOOD!

[Hiroshi Knightmare]

really good! i can relate to it

[GoldenMoth]

My friends have gone through it and I have sat there helping them ease their pain while they talked and explained it. So I wrote what I think it would feel like from my friends description.

[Pressure Sensative]

It's not a bad poem, but I have to wonder how- if it's never happened to you and you don't actually know first hand what ti feels like- how you think this poem can help people who have.... Hmmmm....

[GoldenMoth]

Thanks!!

[Gandycandy]

really cool i bet there are plenty of gaians who've felt this way