Of Death and the Afterlife

• Artist: Tyler_Redgrave
• Description: Nothing special, another crap I wrote.
• Date: 10/31/2008
• Tags: death afterlife

Blood crushing in my body
Turning blue and fading away
When the day went on, I felt woozy
From that one act of desperation
As I laid
Dying, dying, dying

For the first time, I felt released
Pleased that body was dead with my spirit alive
As I took a dive into the cool breeze
I flew into the sunset
A new bridge opened
I walked to complete life
And begin a pure rebirth

Comments

[BumbleBeeSex_]

Now that is something able to be put into a novel. Something to lead a person onto thinking: What does this poem have that fits this story? What is it telling me?

My first 5 of 5. *thumbs up* Show the world more and I wouldn't doubt-if writing is what you want for life-that your name would be on the cover of a book granting millions a good book to read.

[nickjonas star]

AWSOME