Dog

• Artist: guilbrob00000
• Description: Dog poem that i created (True story)
• Date: 11/29/2008
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Once There Was a dog
A cute dog
Playing with his ball
With his owner and all
One day the dog
Was chasing the ball
Then All them Sceamed
"CAR CAR!"
The dog looked at them all
Then followed the ball
Whosh whosh a blue car fullted the air
Bang it went over the dog
With all staring and it
The car didnt noticed
Didnt even care
My father picked up the dog
Layed it on the grass
The dog eyes were open
For a second
And closed
It lay limp on the ground
Feet up
Then down
We burryed it
And burryed it in the ground
Where we put the ball
And begin burrying it
Then we all staired
And they left I stayed
Picked a rose
And there it lay.
crying

Comments

[sniperfire52]

that very good peom and very sad

[guilbrob00000]

Its very sad she was the neighborhood dog. sad

[Holy Bling Bling]

thats sad. i reminds me about the time my dog died

[Twilight_Wolf02]

omg that was so sad sad , but very nice. good job

[guilbrob00000]

By the way sad Her name i found out a day from when that happend was Lassie or I call her Rose

[guilbrob00000]

I know sad