I Meet You A While Ago

• Artist: GEx_Diamond Krypt
• Description: Love At First Sight Broke
• Date: 12/02/2008
• Tags: imeetyouawhileago

You yell at me for any and everything
Why blame for something that I had no idea about
You put me threw hell, it felt like
I had love to sell, You was my sunshine
That kept me from becoming blind
I had You on the mind 24/7
Till You broke it
I stoped at 11
My mind was made up, your not the one
I thought you was the one
I made a mistake
So i'm not going
To bother it and
Fill myself with hate

Comments

[Only Becca]

It could be good, but it needs a lot of work to get it right. Try using spellcheck and spelling out numbers, for one, and then work on your grammar presentation. It need a lot of re-wording, but if you take the concept and tinker with it for a while, you should be able to make it quite a bit better than it is now.

[Xx_LayLa_Boo_xX]

I love ur poem, I know wat u mean