Miles have no marks

• Artist: wolf_kaname
• Description: I'm currently in a long distance relationship....Very, very few people think it will work, but...they don't understand just how much I love him. We've been happily together for about a year, but we've liked each other for about 3.<3 He's worth every single mile.
• Date: 12/07/2008
• Tags: miles have marks love distance

Thud
Th-thud
Thud
Th-thud
Your heart beats
With mine
Musical chord
Simple rhyme
Loving looks
Gentle touch
Sweet embrace
I may not
See you much,
But distance
Has no meaning
And miles
Have no marks
When measured
in the beats
Of two lovers
Th-thudding
Hearts.
~Emily McGimsey

Comments

[Shadow Circus]

I'm in a long distance relationship 2... people don't just think it wont work... They also laugh in my back but I don't care, I can live with every stupid immature laugh directed at me, but I can't live without her. This was awesome and made me think about her.
5/5
10/10 biggrin

[Kasumi Higurashi]

Awe! I love it!

[Cheshire Butterfly]

Nice! It is simple, but has great flow!

[Frosted Cookii3]

Its very nice, I like it very much! I'd give it a 4.5/5 if possible, so I'll give it a 5/5.
The beginning could have beter word choice, but it suits it just fine. I love the ending!

[Adderall Sleep]

This is very nice.
I like the structure.
But it could use a little work as far as diction and word choice go.
Nice job.
4/5.
Ps. So far, that's the best rating I've given all day.

[hey girl hey XD]

thats cute!