- i sote there waiting on the truh there is nobody going to take that away from me and thats the truth
- by gangsta_girl_4lift |
- Poetry And Lyrics
- | Submitted on 12/26/2008 |
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- Title: the truth
- Artist: gangsta_girl_4lift
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the truth is u broke my heart
the truth is u forgot my birthday
the truth is u didnt love me the truth is u dont luv me - Date: 12/26/2008
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- Sunafire - 03/04/2009
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This is not really a poem, it just seems like someone whining.
I'm not being harsh, I'm just trying to help you improve, and you can do this through adding structure, rhythm, a few metaphors etc. You could really develop this emotion biggrin - Report As Spam
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