Please Listen

• Artist: TenDica
• Description: This poem actually happened in my life. All these conditions that happened in my families life made me sad. So I wrote it all down. Actually... i wrote this on Christmas because my baby sister went to the hospital that night... I started praying, then it started rhyming. I thought it was cool.
• Date: 12/27/2008
• Tags: please listen

Please listen oh Lord Jesus Christ
For I have a little request.
Don't worry, it's nothing that is bad
Because it is probably for the best.

'Cause you saved my dad from heart disease
And now helping him with diabetes.
You cured my mom from a really bad sickness
That's all I want this Christmas.

You cured my sister from a seizure
And helped me with my asthma.
You also helped my uncle afford
A TV that is plasma.

But I don't care for toys or gifts
I just want something I need.
So please take control of my life
And also be in the lead.

Comments

[RisexWithxthexDead]

God bless you and your family. 5/5 -Sara

[dark fierce link]

nice poem

[bebegreen649]

wow... i really like it.a lot. all the things u put in there....real things that happened 2 u + ur family....its really sweet.and i know 4 a denfinite that God heard ur poem.i know that He will now and 4ever bless ur family and keep u out of harm's way.u and ur family will always be in my prayers.i pray that ur family will be healed of sickness, pain, and sin,and will always be 4given. God heard u.

[Dreamonite]

aww...*notices the word "sister"* u put me in it??
lol...5!!