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in the dark desents of the world, i listen to your voice.
in the lonley shadows of the underworld, i feel your pain.
in the bitter taste of silence, i wonder...
does he like me back...
will it ever be the same for us again...
he loves me...
he loves me not...
the daisy petals are falling like the tears falling from my face into the crystal pool of the universe.
waiting for him to return a message the only message that makes a lonley soul happy again.
it is the only real reason a girl lives.
she lives to hear these three words.
I love you.
- Title: Why Girls Live
- Artist: a_godess
- Description: a poem made by me when i was bored and lonley.... well enjoy
- Date: 12/27/2008
- Tags: girls live
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Comments (2 Comments)
- wylie dufresne - 04/06/2009
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it goes from underworld to
love and then out to the
universe, it seems like
a third grader and a college
student switch out every few lines.
work on making it flow better together.
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- nksnoopy - 12/27/2008
- it's intresting... and very true! soo 4/5
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