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Your lips touch mine, I quiver
You touch my face I shiver,
I tremble in your arms as I press my lips to yours.
Your kisses are electric,
I know I sound eccentric,
But I want to hold you always as you pull me through the door.
Underneath the stars that night
My hand in yours it felt so right
When you knelt before me and slipped the ring onto my hand.
My love is never-ending
My family is tending
Me as I walk up to the man who holds my wedding band.
- Title: Your kiss
- Artist: Okaami
- Description: On-the-spot poestry is often the best... I don't know about MINE, though...
- Date: 12/30/2008
- Tags: your kiss love marriage
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Comments (5 Comments)
- TeDdYs_b3Ar - 05/25/2010
- Great poem loved it <3
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- lordstar - 01/18/2010
- Well done!
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- pyroking209 - 01/03/2009
- Great stuff although just my opinion it sounds better without the as on the second line.
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- PinkFire07 - 12/31/2008
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it wasn't bad at all! I wish you could add more to it.
Not much, just a little bit more.
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- PeachPride21 - 12/30/2008
- Great poem, i liked.
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