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Running,
Pooling,
Pouring,
Gushing,
Flooding,
Such thick blood.
Sticky and hot,
Hanging heavy in the air,
Tangy and metallic.
I can taste it.
Seeping out,
Everywhere,
Filling every space,
Slowly.
Like a broken faucet,
This crimson tide never stops flowing.
My heartbeat grows duller,
Quieter,
Slower,
All that is left of me is almost nothing.
I'm dying.
My life is slipping out in scarlet,
But still,
Everything I had was yours,
And everything that's left is nothing.
- by forgetmenot teardrop |
- Poetry And Lyrics
- | Submitted on 01/19/2009 |
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- Title: Such Thick Blood
- Artist: forgetmenot teardrop
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- Date: 01/19/2009
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Comments (5 Comments)
- Seldoc - 02/22/2010
- so deppressing.... where are the flowers and unicorns?
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- Rayne Engel - 11/03/2009
- pretty~
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- ill be ur sun - 01/22/2009
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the line saying "This crimson tide never stops flowing"i wrote about it a couple years ago
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- Cottoncandyocbra3 - 01/21/2009
- Quite bleak and depressing, I enjoy it. I ask that you check out some of my later poems, if you like this style of poetry.
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- Moonlight_Maiden123 - 01/19/2009
- hmmm nice?
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