am i really?

• Artist: it is in the w a t e r
• Description: soo...i don't know how to explain...but i don't think my poems are any good and they probably aren't ...but feel free to comment
• Date: 01/22/2009
• Tags: really

am i alive
am i still breathing
it seems i've lost the feeling
of reality
i've lost hold of my senses
none of this feels real
none of it seems like my life
for once i am with you
i have no reason to fear
i am so happy to be by your side
but then i remembered
everytime i am really happy
something ends up going wrong
so i'll try to stay happy
because i love to see you smile
i don't want you to worry about me
but as they say
if there was nothing wrong
then there would be nothing right
so am i breathing
am i really alive
are we meant to me
or is it all a lie

Comments

[FreshDemon05]

the feeling of reality can never really truelly be gone you just have to agree on it with somebody, anyways sweet poem and it was pretty deep too, but the deepest pools are almost always the shallowest 5/5

[azuralove4alltime]

i think ur wrong so keep going

[Makoto_22]

good job^^