depressed

• Artist: ill be ur sun
• Description: a poem about suicide
• Date: 01/23/2009
• Tags: depressed

why am i so blue
i can't find a clue
what can you do
when there's nothin left for you
how can you speak
when you mumble very bleak
how can you feel
when no one appeals
with this frown
im going to drown
with this tear
i'll disappear
without a trace
they'll be in chase
they won't find me
cause now im free

Comments

[wolfspirit12223]

i agree with Usagi. it is very simple in writing and in a way lacks that feeling behind it. but it's a good try ._.

[Driftwood Pacific]

eh. The endings kind of weak and it doesn't rhime very well on some parts.