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my happiness
i was running and running from my shodow as it pulled me into darkness
i saw a faint light and ran tword it
i triped and stumbled and fell back again
thinking i lost myself...the light got bigger
i felt a hand pull me up and then a voice ask "are you okay?"
i said yeah now i am......because ive found you again
they didnt understand what i ment..........but i justed huged them
soon i began to smile more every day
then i told him.............by "i found you again" i ment happiness..............you are my happyness.........my heart beats for you
- by Autumn Angel 13 |
- Poetry And Lyrics
- | Submitted on 01/24/2009 |
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- Title: My happyness
- Artist: Autumn Angel 13
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Description:
A poem I wrote
please read
and rate
also if you rate please comment telling me what you rate it and why
I need critisum cuz I want to be an author. - Date: 01/24/2009
- Tags: happyness
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Comments (4 Comments)
- iiMistress Midnightii - 07/06/2009
- 1000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000/5!!!!
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- Nyxs_Ace - 05/12/2009
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Spell check XD
it seems to flow proly, it could use stanzas. 4/5 - Report As Spam
- Bunny Twitch - 05/06/2009
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~+~The poem iiz beautiifulll.....100/100!!!!~+~
~+~IIt remiindz mii of mii lov......<33~+~ - Report As Spam
- ChrisJ520 - 01/24/2009
- it was good but not that much 9/10
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