Your Saviour..

• Artist: xMightyPeanut
• Description: something i wrote when i was depressed..for my baby <3
• Date: 01/27/2009
• Tags: your saviour

Say i love you once, say i love you twice
kick the dirty can and roll the shiny dice
ill be your knight and shinning armor in this horrible nitemare,
ill be the one you hold forever, ill be the one to make you better
just give me this last chance to show you i really care, to show you i mean it when i say i love you.
ill put that beautiful smile back on your face and ill drain all the hate and sorrow from your heart
i will purify this black heart of yours that this monster created
ill prove that that this boy can love again
ill prove to you that ill do anything for you
to show you i really care for you and only you
this boy will save you, all he has if a paper shield and a wooden sword
but with the courage and the love this boy has for you, will be the barrier and sword of his true love that will glow from his heart
that will once again save you from the horrid dream and the nasty monsters
this boy just asks for one thing and one thing only, it is to give him this last chance
just open your arms and let me clean that black heart.
ill be your savior,
ill be your lover,
ill be your one and only..forever

Comments

[-RaiinbowSharpies-]

B-E-A-UTIIFULL
haha i love it..

[Fo-eights Beach Fo-eights]

I'm glad you liked my comment, I loved writing it.
Good luck with your poetry.
=D

[Dark_Robin01]

>_> FUZZZ U
MAKES SINCE TO ME

[xMightyPeanut]

XD thank you =) lol i started to notice that every time I write, i get sooooo into after a couple of sentences then it turns into a crazy story XD gahhh your awesome the way you said all of that XD

[Fo-eights Beach Fo-eights]

WOOOOOHHH THERE HORSEY!!!
You started alright and then you're like, let's shove some stuff in there. Oh can't forget about this! Yeah she'll love this! Wait, I almost forgot about that!
So now step back, read it over, and realize that it starts to make no sense halfway through.
Find the rhythm, stick with it, you had a pattern so don't mess it up.
Rein that horse back in and ride off into the sunset with your girl, that paper shield and, may I suggest, cardboard sword.
=)