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One day ill just drop ded.
A man named God well tack me home.
Ill git 2 be happy.
Ill be loved.
And will im in heven ill all was look at earth.
Ill look at all the pane and sufering.
Ill be waching all of the good and bad thangs.
Ill pray for love.
Ill pray for hapynes.
But ther is no reson for pane or sufering.
But ther is a reson for peace.
- by 1angrry hunter95 |
- Poetry And Lyrics
- | Submitted on 01/28/2009 |
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- Title: One day
- Artist: 1angrry hunter95
- Description: i just thot of it =3
- Date: 01/28/2009
- Tags: oneday
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Comments (3 Comments)
- Moonlight_Maiden123 - 01/30/2009
- some sebteces didnt make since do to grammer mistakes and i think you switched some words around. now i thought it was a nice poem, just fix those things and it'll all be good ^^
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- Sabaism - 01/28/2009
- was the spelling and grammers on purpose? i think they were. they were a nice touch to the poem, 4/5
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- bookgirl1990 - 01/28/2009
- umm... you need to work on your spelling, and your grammer, but other then that i thought the peom was good smile
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