Gilded Resonance

• Artist: Kibroth
• Description: This poem covers my third and last form of poetic expression; muse inspired. Normally, I would not reprint this type, but I believe the recipient of this particular poem would understand...
• Date: 01/30/2009
• Tags: gildedresonance poem romanticpoetry romantic affection

By muted light
Shrouded by shadow
We cradle one another
Against all
Our what ifs’ and what for’s
And all other
Accursed unknowns
Silenced
Through unexpected unity
Found hidden within
Timeless moment

Comments

[Panic Pirate]

Beautiful. I got a very strong sense of time standing still; a million dust particles frozen in a pool of sunlight streaming in through a window; eyelashes resting gently on cheeks; breaths held in rapture (I could go on forever)
I love your effective use of enjambement and how less is more
I have absolutely no criticism of this whatsoever smile

[Idiosyncratic Quirk]

I got the, "hiding from something" vibe throughout the poem until the last line. I somewhat lost the meaning of what it initially meant.

[ADSOC]

sounds kewl

[Kibroth]

Please don't hesitate to comment. I welcome any and all feedback.

-K