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way down deep,
in the dark, in the cold
they take the children
to have and to hold
where the sun doesnt shine,
they cry all alone.
the monsters take flesh
from young ones bone
to make the moon fall
they do their evil dance.
God help the children,
they dont stand a chance.
so I give my life,
to save all the rest,
and I hope they all know
that I did my best...
- by Fallout_surviver |
- Poetry And Lyrics
- | Submitted on 02/02/2009 |
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- Title: down deep
- Artist: Fallout_surviver
- Description: ok peeps, this is a poem for one of my manga books. THAT I WROTE!!! the story consists of monsters kidnapping children and sacrificing them. so a young woman risks her life to, not only save the children, but the world. the sacrifice would cause the end of time. like it, hate it, i dont care! cuz i wrote it!!! enjoy peeps!!
- Date: 02/02/2009
- Tags: downdeep
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Comments (3 Comments)
- AerithBegley - 02/16/2009
- I like this poem.it is kinda sad in a way to me but I still like it.you have always been a good writter keep up the work and don't stop your comics I love em.
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- the ghost rider52 - 02/05/2009
- wow, thats creepy in a cool way! id like to read that manga... write us another one really soon, kay?
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- Fallout_surviver - 02/03/2009
- thanx to the peeps that made it possible for my po~am to get 3 stars outa 5!!! (seriously, thanks guys!!!)
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