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Beat
My heart beats
The beats show I am alive
The breath shows I live
My Air sustains me
The choking
The hope
The faith
Is what kills me
They shatter me
They harm me
They make me scream
Yet...yet it's in vain
It's ignored
I....I can't breath
The music
Heals me
Touches my soul
The screaming
The rhythm
The shattering
Full volume
Broken soul
Random thoughts
Sugar coated lies
Snow globe perfection
Shattered on the floor
Story book ending
Ripped to pieces
Reflection
Can't see, can't hear
Floating in this sea
Twists...turn
Fragment of hope
Drifting from my reach
Open my eyes
And falling
Close them and floating
Darkness
Light
Spread my arms
Open my heart
- by Alexis_Tai |
- Poetry And Lyrics
- | Submitted on 02/10/2009 |
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- Title: Beat and Reflection
- Artist: Alexis_Tai
- Description: 2 poems
- Date: 02/10/2009
- Tags: beat
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Comments (1 Comments)
- jgirl39 - 02/15/2009
- This is hard to rate - why in the world did you put two peoms together? - but they're pretty good. Experiment with lowercase letters and punctuation in the first one. The second is a bit cliche, but I like the last two lines. Also try punctuation.
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