dark lord

• Artist: NecroLord1
• Description: a poem i wrote well ya just ya playing zomg with my other avatar who ya is a newbie to zomg and the omgwtf came to mind and this is what came out but ya enjoy
• Date: 02/16/2009
• Tags: dark lord

come my minions
till my arrival
destroy till i come
look out bellow
and all that stuff
omg will come
for those who
wait and seek
its detruction

Comments

[Cottoncandyocbra3]

It is cliche and bland. The imagery seems weak to me.

[NecroLord1]

well like i said it just poped in my head

[jgirl39]

The "wait and seek/it's destruction" line break is very effective, but the rest of the poem is a little lacking in spirit.