Candy Cane Wrists

• Artist: BabyDoll-Vixen-
• Description: I will never write a description.
  Take what you will from what you see above.
  Apply you're heart and imagination.
  Comment please, feedback appreciated. [:
• Date: 02/22/2009
• Tags: candy cane wrists

My mind cannot grasp this pain.
Jeans continue to uphold these stains.
Sensitive to touch, hurts just too much.
I did this, but why?
For the urge to die?
Not exist, I assume because the world seems doomed.
Society makes judgement.
I'm not one for this treatment.
Born the same with no one to blame...
but yourself.
Foolish to believe the formity of society.
I cut. I slice.
You look at me like lab mice.
Be this. Do that.
I'm not any damn rat.
I am ME and what I choose to be.
Life's not sugar-coated,
though I'm locked and loaded,
ready for whatever comes my way.
Live for today, forget the past.
Let all know this is the first and last.
Last time I'd EVER insist...
to pick up a blade and cut my ******** wrists.

Comments

[Roro-tan]

Its very dark yet it speaks the truth. 5/5.

[BabyDoll-Vixen-]

There are several degrees and several motives to cutting yourself.
It's never JUST ONE REASON.
Again I repeat myself as stated in the poem above.
I have not cutten myself.
It was first & last.

[MIRROR DOLL]

i like this one more then the previous one you've written
however it doesnt flow very well, its like you have several motives for this one poems... though im sure i know the #1 reason.

Havent you been poked and sliced enough doll? You're whole childhood with your back against a pillowed slab because of your condition, having someone else do the slicing and cutting for you.

besides that, clever title

[aredesu]

its kinda sad. honestly

but i still think its pretty good. x)
keep it up bbydoll

[Red_roses_are_sexy]

This makes me so depressed and sad. Which is what I'm assuming you want me to feel or understand. I really like this. Keep up the good work.

[_The PhantomKing13_]

....u better not cut urself.....
but yeah losing someone always hurts.....