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LOOKING FOR EAGLES
To her
almost any bird
could be an eagle.
I don’t even look.
One day while riding
she saw three eagles
and wondered
whether the fourth
a blackbird
was one.
My laugh
said she was crazy.
She said it could be
that I didn’t even look;
just maybe it was.
How can one
see an eagle
if one never
watches the sky?
She is all I need to see.
You see
she is an eagle
to me.
- Title: LOOKING FOR EAGLES
- Artist: UC Poika
- Description: Unrhymed poem about loved one's perceptions
- Date: 02/26/2009
- Tags: eagles love looking
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Comments (6 Comments)
- meizha - 04/03/2009
- Sweet. =)
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- I M Simi 2 - 03/26/2009
- Awwwwz ^-^ thats sweet ;D
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- UC Poika - 03/25/2009
- hell is close to it... try Northern Minnesota USA
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- Angelus Prime - 02/28/2009
- ...where the hell was she that she saw three eagles in the same place at the same time + 1 black bird that appearently was not being eaten...maybe im looking at this wrong. im no good with poetry.
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- jgirl39 - 02/28/2009
- It's a bit jagged - it needs cleaning up. But I like it - short and sweet.
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- Skadi Sundermount - 02/27/2009
- romantic
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