Dark World

• Artist: hadezs7
• Description: This is a poem I made on how I feel right now
  
  Please dont say anything if you have nothing good to say
• Date: 02/28/2009
• Tags: dark world

And now I once more I am alone
In this cold dark world
That I call home
Yet here I am still standing here
No matter how much pain and fear
I live in sorrow
Feed on pain
Yet here I am left dead and drained
Left to suffer in all the pain
Cant think of Anything
To get past all that I'm in
Can't find help
Its all gone from me
Can't you see I've been left
To drown at sea
But no one can see that here I am
Looking for the one for me
So I strive to stay alive
I try to not cry or feel the pain of life....

Comments

[i_love_vampys]

that maes me cry crying

[hadezs7]

thanks for the comments

[alice baby17]

Very pesimisstic. but again another masterpiece! and to the person that thaught this poem needed deeper meaning you need to get a heart or a brain cuz that about the stupidist s*** I've ever heard. Not all poetry HAS to rhyme (unless of course your Dr. Suees). Anyway I loved it just like all your other poems! Keep writting smile

[Agrikar the Hidden]

It's alright. Could use some deeper meaning to it, and some of the prospective rhymes don't rhyme. That and you had two words that rhymed within one line, which is kinda weird. But it was okay.

[Nyxs_Ace]

a depressing work...
but i like the reall feeling you get from the poem