Vampiric Love

• Artist: Lolita the Vampire
• Description: You think Vampires are romantic?
• Date: 03/01/2009
• Tags: love vampire gothic romance cold

Tell me you love me
And I'll tell you a lie

Lie to my face
I'll rip out your tounge

Kiss me passionatly
My cold embrace

More than once
Is never enough

Comments

[Faded Dreams5]

YAY!!! I liked it--especially after all the ridiculous twilight obsessions and "good vampire" crap.
Nice and short, but a really straightforward and to the point.

[KurinPooP]

wow.

[UC Poika]

I think I know a vampire like you. Nice little poem. Fun,

[queen siva]

i didnt get the poetry flow

[jgirl39]

Try experimenting with punctuation. Otherwise, very awesome and very creepy o.O

[Skadi Sundermount]

First! heart