My lie

• Artist: mystic-sharkrider
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• Date: 03/04/2009
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I wear the pink, I wear the heels

But no one knows just how I feel

The pain inside, the fear outside

You asked if I was ok…I lied

I cry at night, my mom and I fight

She loses her temper, as do I

I go to my room and lock the door

I promise… I can’t handle this anymore

The pressures tough, emotions run deep

But there’s one secret I always will keep

My problems are huge, they multiply each day

The truth is something I’d rather not say

My heads in the clouds and my hearts on the floor

I don’t want to handle this anymore

I blame myself for all my pain

Who else could control my brain?

So far life’s not as I planned

I’m all alone, who could understand?

As I’m feeling all this sorrow

I’ll try, but fail, to look to tomorrow

Comments

[Chiruru Sitashi]

He KNOWS ABOUT THE CAKE AHHHHHHHHHHHHH. anyway deep if this is what your feeling don't just look to tomorrow look years and years later and decide on who you will be.

[havishanta]

You kept a good rhyming pattern throughout, which I admire. I find that hard to do. Lol. Very good. I liked the words you used and you conveyed the emotions of the situation pretty well. 4/5! : D

[Red Waffles]

maybe the cake is a lie?

[Mizzy Lol]

this is quite gd xx