Drowning

• Artist: Hoarfrost Dirge
• Description: This is one I wrote in class sitting under the cold AC durring winter when things were realy boring and I felt like drowning in the work, hence my title. But anyway people said it was ok at least. Hope you like it.
  
  
• Date: 03/10/2009
• Tags: drowning ocean tomhart

"Flowing freely, the water ripples and shakes."
"Its cold, deep grip ensares as it disipates."
"Draging me under the icy surface into the shadows."
"Lungs now burn, dire for air."
"Jaw unclentches unwillingly."
"Cold wet salt rubs throat raw"
"The cold numbs the pain with a freezing blast."
"My heat is smothered by the cold."
"And now only the sounds of the ocean lul my eyes to close forevermore.

-Tom Hart

Comments

[TeH cUdDLeH]

It was a good poem <3
and I kno how u feel siting under the AC

[Sow It Up K i d]

i like it 5/5

[Adumbral_Abyss]

Aww... It's adorable!