You(A love poem, I think x3)

• Artist: Abbygail0810
• Description: It's actually a song I made in my head but when I wrote it, I decided it'll be just a poem.
• Date: 03/13/2009
• Tags: youa love poem think

You are like no one else I've met so far
Enough to make me shoot for the stars
Even though the sky is so dark
I'm going to take a chance

I'm liking this scene too much
I'm like a rocket ready to launch
A shot of electricity hit me when we touch
There's no reason why we have to change

You make me feel so wonderful
I've never been so comfortable
Never in my whole entire life
You're the only one I want to be with

In your boxers and your oversize t-shirt
I'm alright here
In your kiss, in your embrace
I'm safe here

The things you do just make me fall in love with you
And everytime I think of you, my heart beats faster
All we need is loyal and the everyday truth
Because without you I'm no better

Comments

[cooll666725]

Very nice. Good grammar, and decent rhythm. XD ^_^

[luvmydog]

i like this poem itss really good!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!