Break

• Artist: Noami Rivers
• Description: All I ever wanted was for him to like me, but now its too late .
• Date: 03/28/2009
• Tags: breaksadness angst love friendship

Break"

In my awake
I watched the world turn into gray
One smile I send you
One smile you refuse to give me

I know this is not much
just a stupid little messed up poem.
I send you love
you send me heart break

Its a never ended circle
I cried
I pray
I gave you friendship

You took it away without a care
didn't look back as you walk on not as a dare
I filled with pain at your leaving
you ran to her

Now I'm still crying
feeling sick
but with a sad smile
I remember how you use to talk to me
instead of her.

I break
I just wanted your love

Comments

[critic-the-homeless]

wow good peom. i never had a gf before (im not a geek or anything) but i kindof feel ur pain. if its true that was jsut a great peom

[Daddy Got This Account]

great job expressing the point. "i filled with pain at your leaving, you ran to her" that is what struck me. thats my favorite line because that is exactly what happened to me. and p.s. if you would like, i have some poems that you might like to read. just an option. but 10/5. ^^