Song for Blood

• Artist: samurai89
• Description: be rough if you please
• Date: 03/29/2009
• Tags: song blood

I want you to sing for me
not just any song do I request
I want it to be filled with pain
I want it to be sung in agony
I want you to be bleeding out
of all of your major bloodways
I want the song to finish you
as you would finish it

The blood should become a pool
around your feet, a crimson pathway
all whom listen shall see the beauty
as well as hear the sounds of your death

they will remember what you were
they will remember your dedication
they will remember your beauty
they will desire you and only you
they will remember you for all time

but you must accept my request
even though it ends in eternal rest

Comments

[samurai89]

I do not believe it is too emo,considering the context is someone speaking to someone else not someone complaining about how sad and pathetic their life is

[darknessinlife]

very well written i like it

[Sunafire]

Kinda too emo, and not very original.
I mean, its is a good poem, but maybe if you put it in a better context it might stand out a bit? smile